Negril

Negril stretches along Jamaica's western coast, with a seven-mile white sand beach on one side and limestone cliffs on the other. At Rick's Café, locals and visitors gather to watch cliff divers leap from 40-foot heights into the Caribbean Sea. Along the beach, you'll find spots like Bourbon Beach where reggae bands perform live music, and small wooden food stands where cooks prepare fresh caught fish and spicy jerk chicken. The water stays clear enough to spot colorful fish while snorkeling, especially near the coral reefs at the northern end of Long Bay.

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1. "You can spend your days..." summarizes activities instead of giving specific examples
2. The phrase "stays calm" could be more specific about the atmosphere
3. "beach destination" is a bit vague

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<introduction> Negril stretches along Jamaica's western coast, with a seven-mile white sand beach on one side and limestone cliffs on the other. At Rick's Café, locals and visitors gather to watch cliff divers leap from 40-foot heights into the Caribbean Sea. Along the beach, you'll find spots like Bourbon Beach where reggae bands perform live music, and small wooden food stands where cooks prepare fresh caught fish and spicy jerk chicken. The water stays clear enough to spot colorful fish while snorkeling, especially near the coral reefs at the northern end of Long Bay. </introduction>

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• Avoids overused travel writing phrases
• Provides concrete details about activities and places
• Maintains a neutral, informative tone
• Uses descriptive language to paint a clear picture

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