Douz

In Douz, you can walk straight from streets lined with 500,000 date palms into the rolling dunes of the Sahara Desert. This southern Tunisian town comes alive during the International Festival of the Sahara, when camel wrestlers compete in traditional matches. At the Museum of the Sahara, you'll learn about the Mrazig people through their clothing, tools, and daily objects. The local markets sell the region's prized "diglat noor" dates, harvested from the surrounding palm groves.

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Issues found in the introduction:

1. The phrase "sits at the edge" is somewhat poetic
2. The introduction summarizes attractions rather than giving specific examples
3. The structure is a bit passive

Here's my improved version:

<introduction> In Douz, you can walk straight from streets lined with 500,000 date palms into the rolling dunes of the Sahara Desert. This southern Tunisian town comes alive during the International Festival of the Sahara, when camel wrestlers compete in traditional matches. At the Museum of the Sahara, you'll learn about the Mrazig people through their clothing, tools, and daily objects. The local markets sell the region's prized "diglat noor" dates, harvested from the surrounding palm groves. </introduction>

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