Located on the Main River in Bavaria, this calm town is known for its 17th-century Schloss Johannisburg palace, surrounded by forests and hills in the region.
Located 41 kilometers southeast of Frankfurt, Aschaffenburg stretches along both banks of the Main River. Walk through medieval streets to find the massive red sandstone Johannisburg Palace, or step into the Pompejanum - an 1840s villa built as an exact copy of a Roman house discovered in Pompeii. The city center includes the 12th-century St. Peter und Alexander church with its Gothic spires and Romanesque crypt.
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- "architectural variety" is vague
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<introduction> Located 41 kilometers southeast of Frankfurt, Aschaffenburg stretches along both banks of the Main River. Walk through medieval streets to find the massive red sandstone Johannisburg Palace, or step into the Pompejanum - an 1840s villa built as an exact copy of a Roman house discovered in Pompeii. The city center includes the 12th-century St. Peter und Alexander church with its Gothic spires and Romanesque crypt. </introduction>Since there's no content provided in the original guide, I cannot analyze or improve it. If you'd like me to help with the content section, please provide the text and I'll analyze and improve it according to the rules